today Toby and David did there pitch presentations to day this where very good. For Toby Toth-Lane Good vocals I could hear them from year 10 form 10T4  the response from the people how where there for the hole thing was very positive with an amazing amount of slides to keep the audience occupied and I thing he deserved his 2B M3 . Know with David Allen's pitch
 He was good but the only things he got wrong personally is he stood there looking all nerves and sound like he was a robot but he and had a lot

Pitch an idea, in one format, for a digital media product demonstrating basic written communication techniques.

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Pitch an idea, in two formats, for a digital media product demonstrating effective use of verbal and written communication techniques.	2	2B.M3
Pitch an idea, in two formats, for a digital media product demonstrating confident and correct use of verbal and written communication techniques.	2	2B.D3

today we wrote about our film proposal to sell our film in my film it is about the end of the world  with 3 main characters. my 3 main characters will be played by Tom Reddin, Toby-Toth-Lane and David Allan.